Action,Description and dialogue

Wack,Wack, caboom Anita, Hanna and Jose they jumped and darted every where


"What was that ?"They asked All three of them looked every where.

"Hahahahaha" Someone laughed.

"Did you hear that?" Asked Jose

"No i didnt hear anything"said Anita.All three of themkept walking.As soon as they got tired of walking Hannah said " Im Hungry!!!"


"SHUT UP YOU HOG" said Anita

"YOU GOT SURVED"teased Jose

"SHUT UP BEFORE I BEAT YOU UP"SAID hANNA WITH AN ATTITUDE

" pzzzzzzz pzzzzzzzzz pzzzzzz hahahaha."

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh"the two girls screamed.

"Omg I cant belive you guys fell for it!!!!!!!!"

"Shut up Jose that wasnt funny!!!"

" Yea it was!?!"

"MUAHHAHAHHAHAHA MUAHHAHAHAHA"someone laughed

"Stop it Jose its not funny, Anita smacked him on the shoulder.

" But that wasn't me this time"

"SURE it wasn't."

"Lets get series now!!!" said Hanna

Later on they kept walking they went up stairs


"Now can we eat?"

Okay okay will eat!

" What do you guys want to eat?

"lets eat Tropical salad!"

Later on the time past Anita and Hanna went to the restroom they were washing their hands. They both walked out they were waiting for Jose. He walked out.

"Lets keep walking.!"said Hanna with a voice you could tell right away she was SCARED.

The lights went on and off and off and on. The mall was getting creepy. It was silent, The only thing you could hear was their breath.

"OUCH stop it hur.t" yelled Hanna

"We didn't do anything." exlaimed Anita and Jose.They kept walking and walking

"OUCH, I triped over you guys"

"You okay."

"Yea im fine."

They found light it was open door they were trying to get out as soon as they got close to the door it shut!?! They ran to the store called JC Penny with frightment

"gurah gruah gruah poshhhhh." the door shut by its self

"What are we gonna do then?" Asked Anita

"I dont know find a way to get out i guess" said Jose

"kay."
said Hanna they kept walking they had no idea what to do they just kept making ideas but they were all stupid intill finally Anita had an idea a GOOD IDEA.......................

"I have an idea."said Anita

"What is it?" said Hanna and Jose.

"We should try to calm down and try not to be scared of the ghost and probably the ghost will let us out."

"Good idea."

later they showed the ghost that they werent scared of him nomore so the ghost started leaving them alone. They got tired so decided to go to sleep.They woke up they prtended like nothing had happened. Later someone came in the mall they were walking slowly to see who and what it was

"who might that be?" they asked

They all found light and got close to it They could finally leave home. A pretty blond woman came in.

the woman asked"What are you guys doing in here?"

they had explained every thing to her she said

"Halloween just passed and someone was trying to scare you guys"

THE END!!!!!!!!

Marley and Me By:John Grogan

Well the genre of this book is Realistic fiction. Well because it is a real life situation that can happen in some year.Also because this happened last year.

The main characters in Marley and Me are John Grogan and of course Marley.The conflict is that Marley is a big disaster for John and Jenny his wife. And the setting mostly takes place in their house and their new home because they keep moving from houses. Well some major events are that Marley gets sick and old and has to go to the doctor. And another major event is that John and Jenny cant find Marley.

I recommend this book to people who are older than 8 years old well because i think that they well love Marley and Me because its a book you well never forget. I say that both girls and boys should read it because they well enjoy it BIG TIME. Well the interest are that it is a really good book. And man if you read you should like really pay attention to it because it is a good book to read. Well if you really love dogs then read it.

One of my favorite books is November Blues well because it is about a girl that is 16 or 17 years old but is pregnant the genre is non fiction. another of my favorite books are twilight because it is a really good book long but good. And the genre is fantasy fiction because something happen for real and somethings are just made up.

Reading Response #1

The first book i read was in English. I read the book with my dad when i was in first grade or second i dont remember. I remember reading th ebook called the little mermaid. It was a bout a little Mermaid Called Ariel who lived in the ocean with fishes and all kinds of other fish.


In my liftime, my greatest achivment has been reading a big chapter book almost 400 pages that seems like alot huh. Im most proud of reading that book because i finished it all when i was in 5th grade

My favorite reading memory was the book called Marley and Me. Well because it really touched my heart. because it was sad a like it reminded me of like what happened to my Dog. I read the book by myself. Marley and Me is my favorite book becausse like it really get stuck in your heart and like it really sad to read.

My favorite way to read is silence reading because you can get your own spot and peace. i like to be reading in a comfortable spot and outside. Well i mostly read chapter book for like my grade.The envoirment for me is cool nature and lots of peace.

I woul have the book called Marley and Me, twilight, tears of tiger, November blues and winnie the book well because Marley and Me is a great book to read again. And twilight because it looks like a great book to read(already watched the movie). And tears of tiger because it looks like a good to read espically for kids our age. November Blues because it like teenagers have ruined their life just because of having a baby. and Winnie the Pooh because we could still enjoy having the books and reading them because we are still children.

The water day

"Do you want to have a water fight?" asked Jasmine

"Sure but we should have the fight but later like in the afternoon OK! thought Vanessa


"Sure if you want, But where should we have the water fight at you're house or at my house?" replied Jasmin


"If you want we could have it at my house"said Vanessa


"Sure, "I'm liking the the plan now!" said Jasmin excited


"OK but we should first have the water fight then we should get in my swimming pool should we?" asked Vanessa


"Of course but i have to find my swimming suit first so that we can get in the swimming pool! said Jasmin



"Oh great then, I'm like really excited to go to you're house well , Am i supposed to meet you at you're house?" Ill call you when I'm on my way to you're house okay!" said Vanessa with excitement on her voice



"Yea okay then , well BYE!!!! said Vanessa dropping the phone quickly and jumping around with excitement!"

Soon Jasmin arrived to Vanessa's house they got ready to blow up the balloons with water!

They were done blowing them up with water and started the water balloon fight!!!!!!



Jasmin and Vanessa got ready to get in the swimming pool then....



Vanessa got in the swimming pool but Jasmin didn't want to go in the swimming pool because, "The swimming pool is to cold and its huge!!!!!!!" said Jasmin with chills on her hands



"Com on get in don't be afraid its not cold"

"OKAY OKAY ill get in" said Jasmin worried